Post by Jake Atur Roland on Jul 9, 2010 23:59:58 GMT -5
((i got board so i decided to take an old plot i roleplayed with an old admin on a old site and use it to a storie...the site is dead so ya...but hear it is...and ill be adding on soo keep watching ^__^))
It had been three years since susan had dissappered. peter,lucy and edmund wounder where she could have gone to. King Jake of the iceland woundered where she was. he couldnt not bare to stand the news of his wife's dissapperance. and woundered if maybe she left. He called a meeting for the three rulers to come and sit with him. "Anything?" He asked peter. Peter who was like a brother had a sad expression to his face. "Jake......she left.......she went back home........." He said to him placeing a hand on his shoulder. Jake looked at him and then sighed. "Shes not comeing back...." Edmund said as he got up. Jake took off his crown and his axe and laid them down on the table. Then he turned to edmund and looked at him. "Ed.....brother......king......will you take over for me?" Jake asked as he looekd at Ed. Ed noded but then asked. "Why? What are you going to do?" He asked as he picked up the crown from Jake. Jake took off his robe and smiled. "See you sister........" He said as he turned to go to the lampost.
As he got there he noticed aslan siting there infront of where the wardrobe would be. and he was speaking to a few of the animal. As Jake walked closser, Aslan got up and walked to jake. "Hail zu aslan king of all narnia!" jake spoke softly wile bowing. "At ease young one.......i know what you want to do you want to go back to see susan........" Aslan spoke softly as he watched jake stand up noding his head in agreement. Aslan smiled and then frowned. "Jake....if you leave now........you will not beable to come back untill you find susan and bring her back....or decide to stay there." Aslan spoke softly to the young king. Jake looked at him and nodded. " I know asaln....but i need to know why she went back and didnt say nothing to me......she knows i wouldn't have stopped her." jake said as he proceded. Aslan moved out of the way so that jake could be on his way. "Maybe....she was hideing something there...." He said as he helped jake move into the brush. "Becarfull jake.......dont let anything get to you young king of the icelands.." as jake stepped through the portal he fell out of the wardrobe. into the old house. "OW!" he said as he rubbed his head.
As he opened the door from the room he could smell the tea from the professors room. he nocked on the door. "Who's there?" said the professor. "JAKE!? IS THAT YOU?" He said in a happy tone. "O my it is " He said again as he pulled jake into the room. Jake explained what happened and the professor could not help but frown. "Well jake...........she is in school.........................................and..........she..."He said as he just closed his eyes. "if you want to know jake.........go to your old highschool son....there your answeres will be." He said as he gave jake a huge and shipped him off. Jake came to the old school only to notice that they where haveing lunch. "Great....i hated this place and now i got to come back here....to find my girlfriend....." He said as he heard a familuer voice....it was jasons. "well well well cute much today? He spoke to a girl who had her hair down and was dressed in school uniform.. "Hey there darling...how are you today?" She said as she hugged him. "Good su and you...give me a kiss!" He said smileing. And the girl did but was it who jake thought it was.
As the girl turned around so that she could see james jake got a good look. and indeed it was susan...and she gave him a kiss on the lips. jake stumbled forward and stepped on a twig. It crunched under the waight he let out and susan and jason looked up. When susan looked up and jake also did the same . she couldn't beive her eyes. she rubed them a bit to see if she was dreaming but she wasnt. Jake who's heart was just slit into just stood there with his hair in his face. Susan appoched. "j-jake....i-is that you!?" she asked as she didnt know.
he took a few steppes back. "I trusted you...........i gave my life for you.......................i died for you......." was all he saidd....she stopped as if she where shot. He picked up a small box he had in his hand and threw it at her feet. "jake....i-im-im soory" she said as she looked at him and noticed a tear dropp fell from his eye then nothing. jake turned his back to her. "i hope......you are happy susan!" He said as he ran back to the house. She stood there for a few minutes and didnt say a word. she knew that she done wrong...so she grabbed her coat and ran to the house. wen she got there she noticed jake was in the wardrobe room. as she opened the door she seen her brother's and sister standing there. and peter looking at her with the really angry look on his face.
jake stood up off his knees and smiled at the three pevensies. "I will miss you............................................................................:He said as he pushed them out of the wardrobe. jake gave lucy a hug. and told them not to worrie. lucy was cring and Ed and peter gave susan a deathly look. "What?!" she said as she seen jake go into the wardrobe. as the door shut they all could see the door being sealed with a chant.
And peter and ed and lucy walked to the professors room ." YOU CHEATED ON HIM!!!!!" Her brother yelled as they got to the room "SUSAN HOW COULD YOU!!!!!" He said as he yelled at her ." IM SORRY!! OKAY I DIDN"T MEAN TO!!!!! I JUST CAME BACK HERE AND STUFF HAPPENED OKAY!" She said practly yelling back at him. Ed just walked up to her. and shooked his head and walked to his room. Lucy who was crying just held the bear she got from jake. "Peter......what happened........."The professor said as he looked at lucy. Peter took a deep breath and then started to speak. "After jake came and told us what happened we where attacked by a resisting talmarines group...they wanted to kill us...but insted jake offered to go with aslan to fight with him to stopp the forces......now.....we can go back....the deal was we stay here stay alive.........and he goes and closes the protal and dies for us..just like he did for you....susan!" he said as he held lucy.
Professor sat there and shoke his head in dissagrement. " Aslan might of said he seal it...but he may not of..you might want to go check it out peter." He said as he sat there looking at susan who was crying to herself. Lucy walked up to her sister...took her hand and smacked susan so hard acrossed the face ed came running in. "You....you should have known susan.....now thanks to ur mistake we lost another friend...no...i lost a brother...hes probally dead now...."She said as susan held her cheak. yea it was susans fautl..she screwed up big time...and didnt know how to fix it.........MEAN WHIEL BACK IN NARNIA!!!
"HOLD YOUR POSISTIONS MEN!!!!! DONT LET THEM GET TO YOU OR WE WILL NEVER SEE DAYLIGHT!" A small dwarf said as they attacked the resisting forces of the talmarines! a few moments later and the battle was over....but where was jake.....aslan stood there beside his body that was hit with an arrow to his heart. "Aslan......i am sorry.......forgive me..." He said...Aslan could not beleave that a mire boy could save him.
That arrow was ment for aslan and jake stepped into the way of it. As aslan pulled the bow out of jakes chest he noticed a girl dressed in white come up to jake. "Shhh aslan i am for myself....but i know jake...and i will heal him for you. "she said as she placed her hand on jakes wound. A small light appered in her hand and the wound started to close. As jake came to he noticed the girl and sat up. "ILLIRA!?" He said as he looked at her. "Illira what?! i thought you where on" He said but got caught off to a kiss to the lips. As she stopped he looked away. "jake.........i know i lied to you.............im sorry...........but i also know that she cheated on you......remember im a part gype.....i can see thease things..." She said as she sat by him. "Lets go to the castle jake.....we can talk about things there....please....." She said as she looked at him.
Jake stood up and picked her up and started to walk to the castle with her. As they got there jake and her started to talk. "Why would sh even do that to you! That ungratefull little!" She said but was caught off by jake holding her. She started to blush and closed her eyes. "jake.....im sorry i left you...please for-" again she was cut off but this time jake kissed her. "I forgive you illira..........just i i im hurt im going to go laydown" He said as he walked to his room. As he did he felt illiras hand holding his and it felt good.
As they came into the room jake and her started to kiss passtionatly and a kiss led to a touch on her body. she moaned and started to kiss him more. As she did jake could feel himself falling in love with her. he started to kiss her neck and she let out a huge moan. "MMMM" she let out as she laid on the bed with him. jake sat there and looked at her then frowned. "Im sorry illira...."he said as he laid down. She sat there and smiled. "jake dear its ok....it will be fine." She said as she laid his head on her lap."I have a question....do you miss her?" She asked jake as she looked at him.
Jake teared up and nodded. "Of corse i miss her...." He said as he got back up from illira.. He walked over to the window picked his flute up and started to play a soft and sad melody. As the song played you could hear the saddness in the tone of the song. Jake was hurt and there was nothing anyone could do about it.
It had been three years since susan had dissappered. peter,lucy and edmund wounder where she could have gone to. King Jake of the iceland woundered where she was. he couldnt not bare to stand the news of his wife's dissapperance. and woundered if maybe she left. He called a meeting for the three rulers to come and sit with him. "Anything?" He asked peter. Peter who was like a brother had a sad expression to his face. "Jake......she left.......she went back home........." He said to him placeing a hand on his shoulder. Jake looked at him and then sighed. "Shes not comeing back...." Edmund said as he got up. Jake took off his crown and his axe and laid them down on the table. Then he turned to edmund and looked at him. "Ed.....brother......king......will you take over for me?" Jake asked as he looekd at Ed. Ed noded but then asked. "Why? What are you going to do?" He asked as he picked up the crown from Jake. Jake took off his robe and smiled. "See you sister........" He said as he turned to go to the lampost.
As he got there he noticed aslan siting there infront of where the wardrobe would be. and he was speaking to a few of the animal. As Jake walked closser, Aslan got up and walked to jake. "Hail zu aslan king of all narnia!" jake spoke softly wile bowing. "At ease young one.......i know what you want to do you want to go back to see susan........" Aslan spoke softly as he watched jake stand up noding his head in agreement. Aslan smiled and then frowned. "Jake....if you leave now........you will not beable to come back untill you find susan and bring her back....or decide to stay there." Aslan spoke softly to the young king. Jake looked at him and nodded. " I know asaln....but i need to know why she went back and didnt say nothing to me......she knows i wouldn't have stopped her." jake said as he proceded. Aslan moved out of the way so that jake could be on his way. "Maybe....she was hideing something there...." He said as he helped jake move into the brush. "Becarfull jake.......dont let anything get to you young king of the icelands.." as jake stepped through the portal he fell out of the wardrobe. into the old house. "OW!" he said as he rubbed his head.
As he opened the door from the room he could smell the tea from the professors room. he nocked on the door. "Who's there?" said the professor. "JAKE!? IS THAT YOU?" He said in a happy tone. "O my it is " He said again as he pulled jake into the room. Jake explained what happened and the professor could not help but frown. "Well jake...........she is in school.........................................and..........she..."He said as he just closed his eyes. "if you want to know jake.........go to your old highschool son....there your answeres will be." He said as he gave jake a huge and shipped him off. Jake came to the old school only to notice that they where haveing lunch. "Great....i hated this place and now i got to come back here....to find my girlfriend....." He said as he heard a familuer voice....it was jasons. "well well well cute much today? He spoke to a girl who had her hair down and was dressed in school uniform.. "Hey there darling...how are you today?" She said as she hugged him. "Good su and you...give me a kiss!" He said smileing. And the girl did but was it who jake thought it was.
As the girl turned around so that she could see james jake got a good look. and indeed it was susan...and she gave him a kiss on the lips. jake stumbled forward and stepped on a twig. It crunched under the waight he let out and susan and jason looked up. When susan looked up and jake also did the same . she couldn't beive her eyes. she rubed them a bit to see if she was dreaming but she wasnt. Jake who's heart was just slit into just stood there with his hair in his face. Susan appoched. "j-jake....i-is that you!?" she asked as she didnt know.
he took a few steppes back. "I trusted you...........i gave my life for you.......................i died for you......." was all he saidd....she stopped as if she where shot. He picked up a small box he had in his hand and threw it at her feet. "jake....i-im-im soory" she said as she looked at him and noticed a tear dropp fell from his eye then nothing. jake turned his back to her. "i hope......you are happy susan!" He said as he ran back to the house. She stood there for a few minutes and didnt say a word. she knew that she done wrong...so she grabbed her coat and ran to the house. wen she got there she noticed jake was in the wardrobe room. as she opened the door she seen her brother's and sister standing there. and peter looking at her with the really angry look on his face.
jake stood up off his knees and smiled at the three pevensies. "I will miss you............................................................................:He said as he pushed them out of the wardrobe. jake gave lucy a hug. and told them not to worrie. lucy was cring and Ed and peter gave susan a deathly look. "What?!" she said as she seen jake go into the wardrobe. as the door shut they all could see the door being sealed with a chant.
And peter and ed and lucy walked to the professors room ." YOU CHEATED ON HIM!!!!!" Her brother yelled as they got to the room "SUSAN HOW COULD YOU!!!!!" He said as he yelled at her ." IM SORRY!! OKAY I DIDN"T MEAN TO!!!!! I JUST CAME BACK HERE AND STUFF HAPPENED OKAY!" She said practly yelling back at him. Ed just walked up to her. and shooked his head and walked to his room. Lucy who was crying just held the bear she got from jake. "Peter......what happened........."The professor said as he looked at lucy. Peter took a deep breath and then started to speak. "After jake came and told us what happened we where attacked by a resisting talmarines group...they wanted to kill us...but insted jake offered to go with aslan to fight with him to stopp the forces......now.....we can go back....the deal was we stay here stay alive.........and he goes and closes the protal and dies for us..just like he did for you....susan!" he said as he held lucy.
Professor sat there and shoke his head in dissagrement. " Aslan might of said he seal it...but he may not of..you might want to go check it out peter." He said as he sat there looking at susan who was crying to herself. Lucy walked up to her sister...took her hand and smacked susan so hard acrossed the face ed came running in. "You....you should have known susan.....now thanks to ur mistake we lost another friend...no...i lost a brother...hes probally dead now...."She said as susan held her cheak. yea it was susans fautl..she screwed up big time...and didnt know how to fix it.........MEAN WHIEL BACK IN NARNIA!!!
"HOLD YOUR POSISTIONS MEN!!!!! DONT LET THEM GET TO YOU OR WE WILL NEVER SEE DAYLIGHT!" A small dwarf said as they attacked the resisting forces of the talmarines! a few moments later and the battle was over....but where was jake.....aslan stood there beside his body that was hit with an arrow to his heart. "Aslan......i am sorry.......forgive me..." He said...Aslan could not beleave that a mire boy could save him.
That arrow was ment for aslan and jake stepped into the way of it. As aslan pulled the bow out of jakes chest he noticed a girl dressed in white come up to jake. "Shhh aslan i am for myself....but i know jake...and i will heal him for you. "she said as she placed her hand on jakes wound. A small light appered in her hand and the wound started to close. As jake came to he noticed the girl and sat up. "ILLIRA!?" He said as he looked at her. "Illira what?! i thought you where on" He said but got caught off to a kiss to the lips. As she stopped he looked away. "jake.........i know i lied to you.............im sorry...........but i also know that she cheated on you......remember im a part gype.....i can see thease things..." She said as she sat by him. "Lets go to the castle jake.....we can talk about things there....please....." She said as she looked at him.
Jake stood up and picked her up and started to walk to the castle with her. As they got there jake and her started to talk. "Why would sh even do that to you! That ungratefull little!" She said but was caught off by jake holding her. She started to blush and closed her eyes. "jake.....im sorry i left you...please for-" again she was cut off but this time jake kissed her. "I forgive you illira..........just i i im hurt im going to go laydown" He said as he walked to his room. As he did he felt illiras hand holding his and it felt good.
As they came into the room jake and her started to kiss passtionatly and a kiss led to a touch on her body. she moaned and started to kiss him more. As she did jake could feel himself falling in love with her. he started to kiss her neck and she let out a huge moan. "MMMM" she let out as she laid on the bed with him. jake sat there and looked at her then frowned. "Im sorry illira...."he said as he laid down. She sat there and smiled. "jake dear its ok....it will be fine." She said as she laid his head on her lap."I have a question....do you miss her?" She asked jake as she looked at him.
Jake teared up and nodded. "Of corse i miss her...." He said as he got back up from illira.. He walked over to the window picked his flute up and started to play a soft and sad melody. As the song played you could hear the saddness in the tone of the song. Jake was hurt and there was nothing anyone could do about it.
